|A note from the FNO
Greetings FNO Bands and
Pass this one on
to your fellow performers, because writing press releases is a very
cool skill to have. Not only will you save a lot of money doing
it yourself, but it's really not a great mystery. This article
lays it out nicely.
Then check out our
featured FNO band for May, Deadwood
Revival from Washington.
Have a great day!
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|The Guidelines For Writing A Press Release
By John Moxey
(photographed: article author john
Don't just submit a background on your band. You have
something which is newsworthy. Remember, you are telling everyone a
significant piece of news, and trying to get the reading public to be
interested in, and ultimately buying your music, your brand. Don't
write an advert.
Just because you find something interesting doesn't mean somebody else
will. Your audience has to find the news interesting. So ask yourself,
why is the subject of this press release interesting? There has to be
something unusual or unique. CDs are released all the time, what makes
yours stand out? Was it recorded, mixed and mastered in 5 days? Did you
take 10 years to record it? All the vocals were recorded backwards, and
then reversed? The album cover has been banned and shops will only sell
it in a brown paper bag?
You can see why publicity stunts often accompany new CDs, or videos.
The point is, pick an angle, and make the connections for the reader.
The angle provides the hook. If you are writing about an achievement,
connect it to you, and the events that lead up to the achievement, with
the emphasis on the positive.
Your press release has to provide the media with appropriate
about your product, or event. Good press releases must answer these 5
Get the message over in
the title and the very first paragraph. Use the
rest of the press release to go onto more detail, and give some context
to the news.
When your write the press release, write it to be targeted at the media
who will ultimately use it. Journalists will often use a press
as source material for a fuller feature, so it has to contain a good
level of information, and be well written. Commonly press releases will
be edited before publication, but this is not always the case.
Sometimes your press release will appear exactly as you wrote it.
Avoid clichés. Avoid hype! the exclamation point (!) is not
cool. Avoid jargon, use the minimum you have to, to get the point over.
Make your release relevant to current events and issues. Stick to the
facts. If you find that you are adding too much embellishment, yet
re-examine the need for this press release, or the angle you are
taking. The media are a suspicious lot. If they think your story sounds
far fetched, and too good to be true, it is your credibility that will
Don't be too wordy. Use enough to get the point across. If you are
struggling to get more than a paragraph you need to really question the
newsworthiness, and/or angle of your piece. Don't use a passive voice
"entered a contract with...". Say "signed to". Use strong verbs. Don't
say "The band played a very good gig and went down well". Say "The band
was brilliant and the crowd loved every minute".
Try to use quotes from band members and those associated with the band.
Before you use a quote, or use the name of a company, get permission
before you use it.
When you finish the press release include a short paragraph that
describes the band, with a very brief history. You know "Formed in 2002
the blahblah band have gained a large following. 5 guys and 1 girl
playing the length and breadth of the country they were spotted in
September 2004 by Chas McMac, CEO of Big Chewy Records. September 2005
saw them being voted "best band wearing jeans" at the much acclaimed
Twisted Music Awards.
Press Release Presentation
DON'T USE ALL UPPERCASE. Use mixed case letters, otherwise it is likely
to get ignored.
When writing your release, use the correct grammar. Not like me. If
there are too many errors, editors will reject the release.
Write your release in a word processor. Don't type directly into an
Don't embed HTML. If the press release makes it onto a non-html medium
it will be unreadable.
Don't list your contact email address within the press release. This is
an open invitation to spammers. However, your mail address may still be
included by the publisher.
Include a summary paragraph.
Avoid using logos or trademark names, without explicit written
Format your press release, like a press release:
Headline is Written in Title Case (first letter of each word is
capitalized, apart from articles of 3 letters or less in prepositions)
Aim for titles of less than 150 characters. Don't End Titles With a
Use regular sentence form for the summary paragraph. Don't just repeat
the title, say it in a different way.
Use the format: City, Region, Country, Date -- Start your
Include your contact details:
Role (if not band member)
Company (if not band)
Street Address (Optional)
A contact email address is normally required for submission, and is
often included in on-line publications.
Include any necessary statement to cover liability etc if necessary.
Songstuff staff member, John
Moxey started Songstuff in 2000 and is an active songwriter and
musician as well as a regular Songstuff author of music and music
technology related articles. John's Website: http://www.johnmoxey.com
|Featured FNO Band
- Deadwood Revival
have been FNO Members for 5 years. The Port Angeles, Washington
band has released two CDs in the past 3 years and
have received radio airplay and excellent reviews with both efforts.
Today, they are still winning over audiences with their superb
musicianship, charisma, and infectious high
With their sweet melodies, old timey groove, and poetic lyrics,
Deadwood Revival is an unsigned band with a full schedule, great press,
and a very promising future.
A few upcoming festivals where you can catch Deadwood Revival:
May 23-24: Juan de Fuca Festival of the Arts - Port Angeles, Washington
May 26: Northwest Folklife Festival - Seattle, Washington
Jun 15: Washington Brewers Fest in St. Edmund Park - Kenmore, Washington
Jun 20-21: Amboy Bluegrass & Old Time Festival - Amboy, Washington
Jun 28: Shoreline Arts Festival - Seattle, Washington
Jul 18-20: Lavender Festival - Sequim, Washington
Jul 26: Bainbridge Bluegrass Festival - Bainbridge Island,
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